I Offer:

Manuscript Critiques (picture books only)
Query Letter Edits
Pitch Creation
Comp. Title Assistance
Zoom Consultations
Mentorship
Humor Writing Classes

Testimonials

Claudine Pullen

Justin’s critique was just what my manuscript needed, it was excellent. He is the King of humor and gave me amazing suggestions to get my manuscript to where I wanted it to be. He considered every aspect I had issues with and got back to me in a timely manner. If you are looking to level up your manuscripts I would highly recommend him.

Tara Knox Cerven

At the recommendation of a critique partner, I recently reached out to Justin for assistance in creating pitches for two of my stories. Justin far exceeded my expectations both in the quantity and number of pitches he provided me with. Do yourself a favor and take advantage of Justin's great services!

Scott Zurilla

I couldn’t be happier with Justin and The Kidlit Hive services. He tweaked my Query letter, gave me a ton of great Pitches and provided multiple Comp Titles that were so helpful. Justin and The Kidlit Hive are a great resource and I’m glad found them!

Maria Modell

I sent Justin an informational fiction PB I’d been working on for a while. His critique was thorough and fantastically insightful. If you’re seeking professional services to bring your ms up to querying level, Justin can help

Nicole Salter Braun

Justin's critique was amazing and thorough. I had been struggling with a humorous picture book for years and he gave me many specific things to work on and ponder. I have a feeling this will be a whole new manuscript once I work on his suggestions. I truly appreciate him and the effort he put into my piece and would definitely use his services again.

Jennifer Phillips

Justin provided a critique on a picture book manuscript that I hold dear. I haven't had success finding it a publishing home despite many revisions and wanted fresh, expert eyes on it. Justin's critique notes and letter were very thorough, straightforward but encouraging. This is helping me identify how to improve the story, including a decision to kill off one my darling passages to create a more satisfying ending. I appreciate him offering this service!

Marti Johns

I purchased a full manuscript critique as well as a query letter and pitch critique. Justin was very communicative and kept me posted on the status of my critiques. The amount of critique I received for what I paid was amazing! Justin gave me both a line by line critique and an editorial letter for both the manuscript and the query letter. Additionally, he created over 20 possible pitches I could use with this manuscript. The critiques have been so helpful and I know Justin's suggestions will carry over to other writing of mine. The critiques were both honest and encouraging. I would definitely recommend having Justin critique your work and will definitely go to him again in the future.

Deborah Foster

Justin really delivered! Not only did he provide some great pitch ideas but he also delivered it on time! I was able to combine his suggestions to craft the perfect pitch. Thank you, Justin!

Jenn Moudahi

I highly recommend Justin's services! He provided insightful and thoughtful feedback to elevate my writing and improve marketability. I was excited to start revising! The phone call was also extremely informative; Justin was open and authentic in our discussion.

Jennifer Lowe

When I decided to treat myself to Justin’s editorial services, I didn’t know what I was in for. The thorough and thoughtful feedback I received on my picture book manuscript was worth every penny. Justin pointed out areas that were working well, offered creative suggestions and ideas regarding weaker areas of the manuscript, and asked thought-provoking questions throughout. His critique left me recharged and excited to dive into the revision process with a clear vision of how to move my story to the next level. I highly recommend Justin’s editorial services to writers of all levels!

Jessica Russo

When I contacted Justin to help me create some pitches, I had no idea that he would craft such a long list! I am now free to take my pick depending on the occasion! I will definitely use Justin's expertise again on my writing journey!

Gabriela Orozco Belt

Justin provided a wonderful critique for a picture book manuscript that was stuck! His insight to the story and what it was missing was spot on. I'm excited to see where his suggestions will take this manuscript.

Andrew Fairchild

Thank you for your amazing editorial talent to help craft a magical pitch for my MS. Highly recommend and definitely look forward to using many of your other services in the future!

Micky Levy

Justin is knowledgeable and caring. His critique was invaluable. Justin's comments inspired me to dig deeper into my characters and story. Highly recommended!

EDITORIAL SERVICES

Whether you‘re new to the exciting world of children‘s literature and looking to write/revise your first picture book or are already an agented and/or published author, I would be happy to help you. I offer many services, listed to the left, through my small business, The Kidlit Hive. To learn about these services in more detail, along with my qualifications, style, process, and the experience I provide, please visit: kidlithive.com/editorial-services

*Please note, using my services is not a guarantee that your work work will result in an offer of representation and/or publication, nor does it mean that my name can be used as a referral. Thank you.